Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is often that modern life presents us with an overwhelming number of choices for all fields which is help to select
our choices. I completely agree that, and believe that internet and globalization are two main factors which
is involved.
On the one hand, some are tell that they have not more facility compare to others because they have lack of option.
This can only happen in one case, they are belongs to countryside. So, they are facing trouble in routine life.
Village have lack of facility, they may be did not get electricity and facing problem in education system. Moreover,
they did not receive proper water facility and they have lack of hospitals. Countryside people want all facility which
is in city. For instance, city have good transportation system, hospitals, library, principally internet service etc.
So, this kind of facility is not receivable in countryside, that's why they are disagree with this pleading.
On the other hand, i along with that people which is agree to this statement. Nowadays internet has source of
expansion in the number of choices that are available to us. Like, we have countless websites available to offering
a entertainment, news, videos, music streaming, live TV programs, many of which are free. Same as all fields they are
involve a new things to make a differ to others to face a competition due to this we have a different choices.
In addition, education system have different fields and collages are procurable. So, we can choose which is
profitable for us. For example, people are want to choose one field but they are confuse which is good for make
future. Nowadays food system is also improving very well, we have lots many options. By the way, we can order food
on internet, lots many websites are available.
All in all, nowadays we are face a huge number of option in most areas of life, and this is often more bewildering
than beneficial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...globalization are two main factors which is involved. On the one hand, some ar...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'told'.
Suggestion: told
... involved. On the one hand, some are tell that they have not more facility compar...
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...ility is not receivable in countryside, thats why they are disagree with this pleadin...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...able in countryside, thats why they are disagree with this pleading. On the other han...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...hand, i along with that people which is agree to this statement. Nowadays internet ha...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'sourced'.
Suggestion: sourced
...o this statement. Nowadays internet has source of expansion in the number of choices...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atement. Nowadays internet has source of expansion in the number of choices that ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Suggestion: involved
... are free. Same as all fields they are involve a new things to make a differ to others...
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Suggestion: thing
...e as all fields they are involve a new things to make a differ to others to face a co...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... they are involve a new things to make a differ to others to face a competition due to ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'choice'?
Suggestion: choice
...etition due to this we have a different choices. In addition, education system have ...
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Suggestion:
...e procurable. So, we can choose which is profitable for us. For example, people a...
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Suggestion: confused
...e want to choose one field but they are confuse which is good for make future. Nowada...
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Suggestion:
... they are confuse which is good for make future. Nowadays food system is also imp...
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Suggestion:
...y options. By the way, we can order food on internet, lots many websites are avai...
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...y websites are available. All in all, nowadays we are face a huge number of op...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, kind of, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94495412844 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6603008776 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516819571865 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0813943957 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.85 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.35 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244208310076 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767090311316 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551672215455 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083168740391 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057416151531 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.