Some people think that more money should be spent to promote the use of bicycles in cities. Others, however, believe that cities should focus on investing in public transport systems.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, government expenditure on the mode of transport has become a noticeable issue. While it can be agured that there should be more budget allocated in encouraging the usage of bicycles, I believe that it is more important to improve the public transit systems.
One the one hand, there might be some reasons why people think it is more essential for people to use bicycles in cities. The first reason is that it actually helps to minimize air pollution in urban areas. With the usage of bicycles, there will be a dicrease in traffic jam caused by cars, so the emission of toxic air pollutants like carbon monoxide and sulphur dioxide will be reduced. Other than that, the citizen could take up a healthy lifestyle to improve their’s fitness by travelling from one place to another by bicycle.
One the other hand, I suppose that there should be more investment made to the public transport system. Modes of travelling such as buses and trains would be more efficient than bicycles. We can reach our destination in shorter amount of time and on top of that, it is more comfortable than riding a bicycles. In addition, the improvement of public transport services can provide more job opportunities for citizen. There would be an increase in demand of bus drivers and train conductors, thus crime rates in cities can be controlled.
In conclusion, although it seems truely to improve the usage of bicycles in cities, I personally believe it would be much better for governments to direct their attention to public transportation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 463, Rule ID: YOUR_S[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their' or 'theirs'?
Suggestion: their; theirs
... take up a healthy lifestyle to improve their’s fitness by travelling from one place t...
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Line 2, column 481, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... lifestyle to improve their’s fitness by travelling from one place to another by ...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a bicycle' or simply 'bicycles'?
Suggestion: a bicycle; bicycles
...hat, it is more comfortable than riding a bicycles. In addition, the improvement of public...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, so, thus, while, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, in short, such as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91984732824 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75413087458 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568702290076 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1584445315 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.416666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247707810285 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091484054965 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859942795515 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142848242695 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046776534429 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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