With the advancement of technology, the phenomenon of watching television and playing graphical games is rise up among the age small age groups.Therefore some people opine that this technology could be bring some mental diseases like depression, while I believe that this smart devices are helpful in their life. In this essay, I will discuss both side of this problem.
To begin with, This technological have some positive impact on children's mind. Firstly, playing video games in leisure time could be stress buster for teenagers. In addition, after playing game they have more focus on their other activities.also, the level of concentration would increase if they play game. For example,one study found out that children who pay with games have better speed in thinking and spot the items as compare to normal children .Secondly, television are the source of learning new things and improve ability. Kids can express their self as a creating new things like famous cartoon drawing.so it is important in their life.
On the flip side, if child addicted with games , it might effect on their academic result. Also, children might suffer from the various mental stages like depression or anxiety attack which is really stressful for their parents as well as state.Moreover, teenagers feel socially isolated which can bring some negative impact on next generation.
To recapitulate, although, playing games and watching TV have their own benefits but, it has negative influence on their mind which can effect on their career. they need to play under the observation of their parents for limited time.
- Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games However some people think that activities are not good for a child s mental health To what extent do you agree or disagree 81
- Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games However some people think that activities are not good for a child s mental health To what extent do you agree or disagree 87
- It is common nowadays for each member of family to have their own peace of modern technology Some people think that this will lead to a break down in the family relationships and communication to what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- It is common nowadays for each member of family to have their own peace of modern technology Some people think that this will lead to a break down in the family relationships and communication to what extent do you agree or disagree 82
- Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games However some people think that activities are not good for a child s mental health To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21317829457 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74567058046 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62015503876 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.5606388314 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.272727273 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2727272727 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192807855652 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751124240769 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412827408473 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115257414449 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254944654561 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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