In recent years the population of city has increased in a dramatical speed. Those who try to move into urban areas believe that it is of great advantages to live in the city, while there is another voice refusing the citizen lives with some negative reasons.
Granted,a great many virtues can be gained via being a citizen in terms of the quality of life and the development of career. Primarily, it is quiet convenient and less time-consuming for individuals to get the daily necessaries as the supermarkets and department stores are nearly everywhere. People can buy the high-quantity products li...
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Sentence: In recent years the population of city has increased in a dramatical speed.
Error: dramatical Suggestion: dramatic
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