Some people believe that it is better to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory or a shortage of money. Other argues that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, the majority of people seem to study and work harder in order to earn their living, meet their needs, and do things they love as well. Some people, by contrast, think that it is better to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or a lack of money. This is a problem should be discussed carefully.
It is clear that accepting a bad situation does not allow people to have sufficient conditions to do the things they want. It means that except for the essential needs of living, people usually demand to travel, care about their health or complete their passions. Therefore, for an unsatisfactory job, people can not try their best in working, which does not give them a high salary. Then, for a low salary, they can not carry out their left needs but the essentials.
On the other hand, the best way in such situations is to try and improve more and more. If they love taking photos, they may become photographers. For this favorite job, they can burn with their passions, as well as earning money from this. Of course, they must make an effort to achieve that result if they do not have conditions. For example, Harland Sanders, who had a hard life and intended to be suicidal, became a millionaire with the KFC brand at the age of 65. He tried and improved bad situations to change his life in a better way despite his high age.
Generally, each circumstance would have a different solution. If you meet a case that not give you benefit, you will ignore it by accepting. However, when you face a problem which is detrimental to you, you must try and improve to make it better.
In conclusion, before giving a way to solve a problem, you should think carefully. So, in my opinion, trying and improving such bad situations in life may be a better way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, except for, for example, in conclusion, of course, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53894080997 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58089488929 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538940809969 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6847330571 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.9444444444 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275401927856 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913975410622 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116124835043 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164641717332 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729827937634 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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