Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that its better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
There are different views about whether academic education in university cause more success in future job or it is better to get a job without entering university. I personally subscribe to former view. Based on the following discussion.
People who support the idea to get a job immediately after school might have several reasons. Firstly, they argue that having a job as soon as possible can make the opportunity for youngers to learn practical work rather than just academic knowledge so they can be more successful in their future career. Moreover, it is believed by some that the sooner they have a job, the faster they can be independent and earn money. Consequently, young generation are enabled to create their own life by the time they can work.
On the other hand, others including myself think having a university degree can help young generation to learn their field of study more professionally. As result they will be able to apply for high level occupation which is only possible by having university dgree. In addition, those who have academic education can gain higher salaries than those with fewer qualification. As a result when they have higher degree they can compete others to get the position they want in a company.
To recaptiulate, although som people believe finding a job right away after school is the perfect way, I agree upon continuing studies in university over school level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05084745763 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73065523704 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597457627119 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.03478074 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198601218147 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758451575206 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703607020904 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14288602863 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558439533954 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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