Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area.
• Mention about the current sports facilities available.
•What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced.
• How the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to ask if you would be so generous as to provide some new sports facilities for the middle aged of this area.
Presently, tennis and hockey are being played by children on the field of the community high school. But there is no facility for sports that people, who are my age mates, can partake in after office hours.
I was wondering if it would be possible for you to establish an indoor stadium for games such as football and volleyball on the open ground near the town hall, which has become a dumping spot for people to throw garbage and other waste materials.
If you could provide us with these facilities, it will not only improve our health, but also reduce the risk of developing several diseases like diabetes, obesity and cancer, as we live a sedentary lifestyle.
I look forward to hearing from you in due course.
Yours faithfully,
Kate Smith.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to ask if you would be so g...
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Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you in due course. Yours faithfully, Kate Smith.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 160.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70625 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41071015211 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.76875 0.561755894193 137% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.8773081337 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213736858963 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896406409987 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101495546883 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104781097154 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116292230204 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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