Promoting health and fitness through sports and social facilities is important, for local communities. In order to provide these facilities, multi-scale companies could take the lead. By providing such facilities local communities will be benefited. Therefore I am in the favor with the view that companies should provide health improvement facilities to the local communities.
Sports help a person to improve their lifestyle. For example, sports are able to develop a persons mental state by making them relaxed and making stress free. Sports make a person free from diseases and keep them healthy. A company is extracting all resources from the society, such as ( land, water, human resources, capital) therefore the organizations are liable to the society. In order to repay for the society the companies could establish sport centers or could contribute the government to develop social facilities and up lift the local communities. When the company engage in providing such facilities it would be mostly useful for the organization's workers itself. The organizations employees will be more energetic to work in the organization, as they are in physical well-being. When the employees of the organization engage in sporting activities their stress will be relieved and the pressure will be released creating a relaxed mind. This would help the employees to work more productively and efficiently for the organization, as the employees are in mental well-being.
In return, when the organizations provide the sport and social facilities for the local communities, organization's brand name will be popular among the customers. Moreover, the customers trust towards the organization will be improved. Furthermore the government interference for the organization will be reduced as a result the organization will be benefited with tax reliefs. Due to more efficient and productive employees the organization's sales turnover and the profit will be increased, by creating continuous existence for the business in the society.
To sum up, it is clear that a company gains a better reputation in the society as their payback to the society. therefore it is important that the companies should provide sport and the social facilities for local communities in favor of both parties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46458923513 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11207820857 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441926345609 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5489579712 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.526315789 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302238517756 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119966004893 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121124254637 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254228809206 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115575295425 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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