There have been major advances in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvements in people's lives. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
The newly-invented technology changes people's lives. It is true that the invention of technology improves quality of life for people in today era. While the improvement results in great convenience, I believe that there are some drawbacks of technological development.
Supporters to this statement argue that the major advanced technology provides a positive influence because everyone has easy access to acquire in-depth information. Taking the internet as an example, over following 30 years, the development of technology has been spreading in the world, and it has been automation for some pr...
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Sentence: Those can affect on children behaviour and this results in increasing the rate of cohabitation recently.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to children and behaviour
Sentence: In addition, some household technologies, washing machine and vacuum cleaner, help people to do chores activities so people do not have enough physical movement and become illness.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to chores and activities
Sentence: Lastly, the advances technologies, smart phone and tablet, channels many netizens into an isolated life.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to advances and technologies
Sentence: Lastly, the advances technologies, smart phone and tablet, channels many netizens into an isolated life.
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