Nowadays, road accident is increasing day by day although government is making effort to control it. Research says that most car crash is plausible to happen by young drivers because of their overconfident and ignorance. I concur with this idea of teaching children about safe driving to avoid this serious problem and firm believe that it can help to decrease the scenario. I will explain the idea in the subsequent paragraph.
To begin with, youths find themselves energetic, smart and knowledgeable and do not care about driving rules. Consequently, they hit their vehicle with some objects. For example: louder music, leaving hands while driving, drinking alcohol may lead to the misfortune. But if we become able to train student in their school those things, it will be helpful to reduce road accidents. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. Around ten years ago, when I was in high school, I got driving licence and my excitement exceeded the limit, moreover I started to drive most of the time leaving hands, over speeding. I am sad to say that, my car collided with a tree and I got injured. Furthermore, after going to university, traffic session was more helpful to enhance knowledge about the consequences of overconfident.
Secondly, if youths are trained about the driving skills, they may take precaution about the accidents that may happen because of their carelessness which helps to reduce road accidents and decreases the death caused by automobiles. It is believed there are fewer chances of occurring accidents who have taken traffic classes than that who have not taken it.
Finally, progeny does not have experience like older people and they do not know proper rules and regulations because of which, there are more chances of accidents. So, it is substantial to make them know about traffic rules that is essential to know before obtaining licence.
To sum up, it is really beneficial to train offspring about the rules and regulations that is related to traffic to control the possible accident. As they are unaware of it, and do not care about the probable consequence of their madness towards high speed and crazy attitude towards driving, they are compelled to be aware after knowing the result of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0182767624 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70807154018 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566579634465 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4578760587 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.777777778 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156240420552 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416340681702 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432978619002 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810210207022 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547823113077 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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