you are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:
introduce yourself
explain what sort of job you would like
say what experience and skills you have
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in connection with the recent job advertisement your agency placed in the Times of India 18th July 2020 edition. My name is Dimple and I have done a Bachelor of Engineering in Information Technology from Mumbai University. I have a lot of inquisitiveness to gain more knowledge in the Salesforce domain. Hence would like to apply for Salesforce Consultant as a Software Engineer. The main reason for a change is to enhance my knowledge and skillset.
Since my engineering days, I have been very fond of coding. I have even participated in a lot of online hackathons and coding competitions. Hence if given a choice, I would like to work in the same stream of software developer mainly concentrating in Salesforce Technology. I would want to gain more experience in the core concepts of technical aspects of Salesforce customizations along with configurations.
Overall, I possess 4 years of technical expertise as a Salesforce Technical Consultant. During this tenure, I have gained valuable experience in Apex Classes and Lightning modules. Additionally, I have had the opportunity and the exposure to even conduct Salesforce Trainings in my office. Moreover, I hold 4 certifications of Platform Developer 1, Platform Developer 2, Salesforce Administer and Sharing and Visibility Designer.
I have attached my resume with this letter for your reference. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Dimple Patel
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2022-06-04 | Firdouspathan | 73 | view |
| 2020-07-19 | Dimple7 | 78 | view |
| 2017-07-07 | sanakhalid1234 | 70 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 318, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ore knowledge in the Salesforce domain. Hence would like to apply for Salesforce Cons...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ine hackathons and coding competitions. Hence if given a choice, I would like to work...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29184549356 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34400044314 2.54303337028 131% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579399141631 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4036244457 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0625 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5625 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8125 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155190491543 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480262503259 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480678369029 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104520904965 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687571935546 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 41.2886597938 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.