In everyone's life, friends are essential to spend harmonious lifestyle. It fact, it is virtually impossible to be with our old friends as people have to transfer from one place to another. To be honest, I am not concurred with the idea about not making novice friends but retain only old friends and firm believe that human beings have to develop their relationship according to circumstances, place, and situation. I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraph.
To begin with, friendship may stay for so long but not friends because we have to separate for our career, family, further study. Moreover, we can not be together with our old friends and it is substantially necessary to make new friends to share our sorrow and joy. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. My best friend moved to Australia after her graduation and I flew to America for my further study. We can not be together though we have abundant love and respect for each other. It is true that people can not live in isolation so I had to search new company for difficulty and recreational activities.
Secondly, there is a quotation " time is money and motion is progress". In my view, it is totally related to travel and making new friends which is beneficial to perceive different ideas and upgrading our career and lifestyle. When we interact people from different age group, different society and ethnicity, it is possible to stimulate our mind and expand knowledge that is quiet better than reading many books. I remember, About five years ago, I went to the rural area of Nepal to intervene disability where I make some friends and it was really worth memory of my life to study far western culture and society which I never got from my old friends.
Finally, behavior of old friends may differ as we all know people change according to time frame. In this situation, new friends are grandiose than the old friends. they may be more mature, sincere, and decent towards their near one. It means, person may be more compatible with their novice couple.
To sum up, there are more reasons to develop a new friendship than sticking with old one though we should not forget our old friend after making new. It is necessary to keep in touch with someone to be upbeat and transform according to modern world that is full of melancholic.
- Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone Others like to be with friends most of the time Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends Use specific reasons to support your answer 61
- It is better for children to grow up in country side than in large city 76
- Grade encourages students to work harder at school Do you agree or disagree Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 70
- Nowadays we communicate less with our family members To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Nowadays people are busy with many things If you were given a short period of time what would you choose 1 Learn to play a new sport you never played 2 Learn to cook food in a different way 3 Learn to do some hand made work like clothes 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...nds are grandiose than the old friends. they may be more mature, sincere, and decent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, in my view, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76923076923 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64749798152 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524038461538 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0015686033 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266904398858 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896863012137 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865230399608 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173616807184 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455968620831 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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