In the last century,the earth become more polluted than it used to be.It is said that human is one of the main contributor for this phenomenon.This essay will first identify some of the possible causes and then two important contribution in tackling this problem.
It might seems strange but human activities is the first and most important cause for the pollution of earth. When people drives in any transportation like cars or buses, combustion is happening and the gases from the process are released to the atmosphere by the exhaust. Some of them are worse as its effects spread across the whole world, for example explosion from nuclear fission or oil spill. Sometimes nature is the one who is contributed to making our earth more polluted but its contribution is very minor and even helps in attaining stability. Forest fires is one of them as it releases CO2 to the air.
This problem, however can be addressed by these two effective solutions. First is through education especially to children so they will be more aware and concern for the environment. It will also help them engage in action in reducing pollution in the environment. Another solution is to reduce the amount of carbon footprint on earth. By changing our usual habits, we can starting by following the measures adopt by government like carpooling, recycling. We can also change ourselves into vegetarian or just consume less beef as one study found out that cows produced to most CO2 per kilo of the foods but some people don’t want to become vegan so they eat chickens or pulses instead.
In conclusion, given the previous-mention causes, teaching people about environment and reducing carbon footprint are effective in dealing with these issues.
- The table below shows the monthly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 83
- Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports Why is it Is it a positive or negative development 87
- The maps below illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 to 2012 78
- The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions 73
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03125 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.796893859 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3329787459 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159800840099 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499675368638 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628497187602 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967917833684 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682181854953 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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