Some people in some societies prefer to live in their home rather than to live in other’s house.
It is essential for people in some nations to live in their own house rather than to live in someone’s house. I strongly believe it is good for the people who live in their own house for some reasons I discuss below.
There are a number of advantages to owning your own house. People who live in their own houses feel safer and more comfortable. If one has their own house, they do not worry about being forced to leave the house and feel safe about their and their children’s future. In addition, you can only feel comfortable in your house where you can do whatever you want. Landlords have rules and expect you to obey them. For example, they ask you to pay in advance, no pets allowed, and they limit the number of people to stay or invite.
I believe living in your own department is better than renting a house. First of all, he or she does not have to pay for the rent which is becoming expensive especially in cities. One might have different economic status in every month and at dark times such as quarantine when many people cannot work, it is difficult for them to make the payment. Another drawback of renting is that a renter cannot change the house without owner’s permission which makes hard to live as he or she wants. Even if they changed the house spending a lot of money, they could not take the items namely repaired items with them when they move.
In conclusion, living in one’s own house is more preferable than renting for the reasons stated above.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47970479705 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27716240252 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527675276753 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3243950601 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7142857143 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300689630029 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120894698925 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141685879656 0.0667982634062 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224198344347 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139433790686 0.056905535591 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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