TPO 41: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Teaching is a one of the pivotal jobs in the history of human beings. Definitely, teachers are people with the most influence on the culture of societies. In spite of their critical role, they are depreciated now in comparison to the past. The altered society, changed merits and unqualified ones are contributors to this unfortunate transition. A complete illustration to the factors is as follows.
As a threshold matter, the fact that our society has impacted drastically is indisputable. This occurrence is directly tangible in students’ behavior. They are less polite comparing to the past students and they are neither punished nor blamed for their crucial acts. Accordingly, they are not afraid of teasing or humiliating their teacher anymore. Conversely, in the past time, every student had to respect their teachers even though they were rude to the students.
Furthermore, in the previous years, teaching was the most reputational job. They were considered as the wise individuals that their career was a dream to many of people. Nonetheless, as merits are defined differently nowadays, other jobs such as doing business and playing football are under a high attention of people. Teaching, unlike the current imagination, is still the most effective activity which is able to direct the next generation to prosperousness. It is regretful that money has replaced with knowledge from the most of the youths horizon of view.
Last but not least, it should be asserted that ample number of teachers is also devaluated the efforts of some teachers since there are some unqualified teachers including to their number. In spite of the fact that distinguished teachers are yet tutoring well in classes, there are some barriers to their job position. Working only for financial reasons, those teachers are threatening the credit of their colleagues.
In succinct, teachers are less adored in societies nowadays. Whereas their momentous responsibilities, they are not valued like before as for three factors. Modifications in our society, transitions in merits and increased number of unqualified teachers are reckoned for this unpleasant misbehave.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: pastime
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Suggestion:
... though they were rude to the students. Furthermore, in the previous years, teac...
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Suggestion: youths'; youth's
...ced with knowledge from the most of the youths horizon of view. Last but not least, i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, conversely, furthermore, if, nonetheless, so, still, well, whereas, as for, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38461538462 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03889794807 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568047337278 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9287005472 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0952380952 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142447599518 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417867061639 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345270770614 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795735987927 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027561029583 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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