The bar chart illustrates consuming habits and purchasing as the relate to coffee and tea in 5 different cities in Australia namely : Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart over the last 4 weeks
Overall, Most of residents in cities in Australia went to a café for coffee and tea except Adelaide while purchasing fresh coffee was less common in last 4 weeks
Looking first of all at going to cafes, it was most characteristic of Melbourne and Hobart at the same percentage 64% .The figure for Sydney was slightly lower by 3% and followed by Brisbane at approximately 56% and finally Adelaide at under 50%. However the percentage of citizens who bought instant coffee in Brisbane and Hobart was higher and 50% which stood at 53% and 54% respectively, compared to Sydney (46%) ,Melbourne (47%) and lastly Adelaide at 50%
Stocking up on fresh coffee was below 45% for all cities. It was most common in Sydney (44%) and Melbourne (42%). Hobart was next at 39%, and Adelaide and Brisbane were much lower and nearly level at around 34
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ates consuming habits and purchasing as the relate to coffee and tea in 5 different cities...
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Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the residents') or simply say ''Most residents''.
Suggestion: Most of the residents; Most residents
... Hobart over the last 4 weeks Overall, Most of residents in cities in Australia went to a café f...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ne and Hobart at the same percentage 64% .The figure for Sydney was slightly lower...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... and Hobart at the same percentage 64% .The figure for Sydney was slightly lower by...
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Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... 56% and finally Adelaide at under 50%. However the percentage of citizens who bought i...
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Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ee in Brisbane and Hobart was higher and 50% which stood at 53% and 54% respectiv...
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Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...54% respectively, compared to Sydney 46% ,Melbourne 47% and lastly Adelaide at 50%...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, lastly, look, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80898876404 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65171939359 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578651685393 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 221.097687686 43.030603864 514% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 214.0 112.824112599 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.5 22.9334400587 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5 5.23603664747 296% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0717576961754 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346966899031 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379869139487 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649694288974 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045688010794 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.2329268293 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.74 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.51 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 11.4329268293 472% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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