The table below shows the numbers of people in each age group working in certain sectors in the UK in 1998 and 2006.
The table compares the number of workers in certain sectors which is derived from some age of groups in UK in the year 1998 and 2006.
At the hotel & catering sector, there was a significant drop in number (in 1998) among the age of groups while in 2000 the fluctuation just happened from the age 18-25 to 36-45. It can be clearly seen that in 1998 there was 25.764 of 18-year old workers then continuously showed a drop trend from 26, 36, 46 and 56 about 17.663, 15.229, 8.201 and 4.300 men respectively. The noticeable progress in 2000 was in the age of 36-45 about 21.303 workers.
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Dear Sir, Sorry if I'm
Dear Sir,
Sorry if I'm wrongly interpreting your idea. I have an opinion regarding with this one:
workers in certain sectors which is derived from
workers in certain sectors which are derived from
The reason why I made "is" instead of "are" because "is" on this context belongs to "the number". And I ever made mistake similarly on my previous essay in which "are" was on the sentence. In fact, you gave me a comment about that.
And this is similarly with this one sir:
The highest number of workers in this year was in the age 18-25 by 112.565
Again, I'm really sorry if I'm wrong. I just need more practice. Thanks
sectors which are derived
sectors which are derived from
here 'are' as the verb in a clause for which, and which refers to sectors.
The highest number of workers in this year was
'The highest number' is the subject which is singular.
workers in certain sectors which is derived from
workers in certain sectors which are derived from
flaws:
Need to catch up the main features:
hotel & catering: all up except 18-25
building : all down
technology : greatly increased
education : a slight difference
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 240 200
No. of Characters: 1046 1000
No. of Different Words: 113 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.936 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.358 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.332 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 63 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 46 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 21 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.96 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.462 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.712 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.083 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4