The major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in cities are facing? Give solutions to these problems.
In recent times, the urbanization pace is occurring very fastly on a global scale and this also gives rise to several issues that residents, youngsters, in particular, are coping with, embracing the unemployment problem and the lack of accommodation. In my opinion, there is a number of measurements to deal with this phenomenon, that will be given in the following essay.
It is undeniable that the rapid development of metropolises in over the world is considered as the main culprit which causes the rise in the jobless rate and the shortage of housing. Firstly, the workforce plays a vitally important in the growth of any large cities in a nation, therefore citizens including adolescents from other parts of the country tent to relocate to meet this requirement, especially the well-educated students. However, job chances for lower-skill employees would be decreased in the labor market that is highly competitive. As a result, the number of young people without work could increase, which means they put a heavy burden on the national budget of the government. Secondly, the young population move to the major urban for working or studying purposes is a key contributing factor in the lack of dwells due to the fact that they usually reside with their family members or friends in order to minimize the expenses for living such as mortgages, school fees, and traveling.
Encouraging adolescents to move to the outskirts of cities or satellite towns may the most feasible method to address in this case. Not only do these solutions help to make use of existing manpower but also motivate the progress of nearby regions. In addition, simulating students to choose suitably occupations in order to avoid human resources redundancy is also taken into account.
In conclusion, the migrant to surrounding areas of metropolises and job orientation could be viable answers for issues that young locals are facing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15064102564 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94181012216 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621794871795 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5850442419 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.090909091 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3636363636 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157105578549 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409601925499 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333550400238 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682225033925 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282622597132 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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