You had an appointment with the bank and now you realized that you can't make it for that .write a letter to the manager
-Give details about your appointment and dates.
-Explain the reason why you cannot make it.
-Ask for other dates.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to postpone the appointment for Business loan which was scheduled on 6th August 2020.
Let me explain to you in more detail. I am Tim Frank and contacted you on 4th August 2020 for the finance which I am planning to take from your bank and the meeting was scheduled in person tomorrow to discuss the same.
However, I will not be able to meet you on the said date as there has been some emergency which has arised. My uncle has came to Mumbai for his knee treatment and the doctor is going to operate him tomorrow, so I need to be with him all day and take care of him.
Is it possible to reschedule the meeting on or after 10thAugust 2020, as that time I will be available? I would request you to let me know your availability as well as the timing for the same. Also, let me know if I need to carry any documents.
Apologize for the inconvenience caused to you.
Yours faithfully,
Tim Frank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...mergency which has arised. My uncle has came to Mumbai for his knee treatment and th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33516483516 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43404112805 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6368442935 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259368159338 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108691852753 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811008461891 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155140418962 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555270038239 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.