Nowadays, many charities and organizations have to publicize their activities by giving a name to a particular day, such as National Children's day for encouraging treatment of children, National Non-smoking Day for encouraging people to give up smoking. Why do these charities and organizations do so? How effective can these special days be?
Over the past, most of organizations charities are modernizing the names of days and converting them into special and ordinary special days. It seems, it is a wonderful instrument in the hand of charity and organizations to perform their activities. Commonly, they usually do this to raise the rate of funds and it gives opportunities help people to get together.
Majorly organizations, especially non profits, try to raise money by giving special names to days. For instance, National Children’s Day attracts people who loves children. This strategy not only catches the attention of masses but also they can easily get information about the work of like these organizations.
There are a lot of reasons to give charitable organizations to give the special days’ name. On the other hand, organizations establish special days to give a name to events to make it easy to be memorized, that is why they will tend to remember the date and the content without seeing the advertisement. For example, International Woman’s Day is remembered as an event on 8th March to celebrate and to value of our valuable woman. Men respect and love more on that day. In addition, Non-smoking Day for example this special day, will enhance people awareness towards the dangerous of smoking to health and aware the youth about harm of smoking and try to give up this bad habit.
To sum up, organizations and charities prime reason behind naming days could be to contribute power of society and shows that people in this world more care about each other.
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- Nowadays many charities and organizations have to publicize their activities by giving a name to a particular day such as National Children s day for encouraging treatment of children National Non smoking Day for encouraging people to give up smoking Why 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the organizations') or simply say ''most organizations''.
Suggestion: most of the organizations; most organizations
Over the past, most of organizations charities are modernizing the names of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01162790698 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91250378963 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4291721108 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395680544327 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143611194615 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964729903052 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217022086791 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825010805439 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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