The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart compares the data about quantity of Japanese tourists travelling abroad during a 10-year period starting in 1985, whereas the line graph depicts the information about tourists of Japan visiting Australia. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the number of Japanese tourists was increasing in a certain period, visiting Australia by these tourists was climbing as well.
According to the bar graph, it can be seen that there was a gradual rise in numbers of tourists who have a trip from 1985 till 1990. However, in 1991 the quantity of travelers witnessed a slight decrease from about...
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.703 4.0
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
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