According to the letter, the owner of the apartment complex makes a proposal to reduce the cost of water fee by restricting the maximum water flow of all the apartments. The owner believes that this strategy will not be complained by the residents. However, some drawbacks in the assumptions need to be confirmed.
First of all, even if the report of water usage after adjustment was not yet available, the owner arbitrarily believed that the water usage was declined, which makes good saving for the corporation. However, without reading the report, we cannot make this assumption easily. In reality, perhaps when the residents noticed the small water flow, they changed their behavior to use the water. They started to store the water in the tanks for further usage. In this case, the total water usage would not decline at all. Therefore, to asssure the strategy really reduce the total water usage, the owner should wait for the result of the report than he or she can believe this evidence.
Furthermore, the owner mentions that only few residents complained about the low water pressure, and he or she states that the change was not complained by many residents. However, it’s too arbitrary to make the conclusion. Maybe most of the residents they noteiced the change, but they hadn’t complain about it to the owner yet. Some people thought that the adjustment was temporary and it would back to normal after few days. If they realize that this adjustment would last forever, they would start to complain at that moment. Therefore, in order to really understand the opinion from the residents, the owner needs to do survey on them to make this assumption cogent.
Finally, we don’t know what is the strategy for the owner to decide the experiment target. If the residents in the first three buildings is less than other buildings, then this experiment is not countable. Or if the residents in the target buildings have different behavior of using water, then this experiment is not aimed at the right sample to represent the whole group. The owner needs to provide what is the strategy he or she used to pick the target, then people can trust this experiment can reflect the real circumstance.
To sum up, the owner of the apartment complex miss several details and evidence in the letter. Further information needs to be provided to make this assumption reliable.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 404 350
No. of Characters: 1918 1500
No. of Different Words: 185 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.483 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.748 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.447 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 121 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 93 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.238 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.508 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.321 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.535 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.141 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 28.8173652695 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 2260.96107784 88% => OK
No of words: 402.0 441.139720559 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94278606965 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5593533552 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 204.123752495 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477611940299 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 705.55239521 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.764025825 57.8364921388 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.619047619 119.503703932 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 23.324526521 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 5.70786347227 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.67664670659 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192003563849 0.218282227539 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619927650297 0.0743258471296 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602591792545 0.0701772020484 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11321557826 0.128457276422 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698384953644 0.0628817314937 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.3799401198 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 98.500998004 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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