1. People nowadays are encouraged to buy more and more consumer products. Some people think that it is good for the economy, while others believe that this development will damage the society as a whole. Discuss both views and give your opinion
A myriad of people are motivated to change money into consumer items and many of them assert that it will facilitate the economy, however, others maintain that this enhancement causes negative impacts to society. This essay will discuss both of these views.
There are two main reasons why consuming consumer goods is positive for the economy. Firstly, should citizens allocate more money for household items, the problem of unemployment will be tackled. When people are liable to purchase consumer products, more enterprises will spend their money on expanding manufacture which will lead to labour shortage. Accordingly, not only companies have to recruit more personnel to operate systems smoothly but this action also decreases the cost burden of unemployed to the economy. Moreover, consuming commodities that belong to domestic will contribute to the consumption of the host country increase and make their country more affluent and beneficial for the economy.
On the other hand, the enhancement of consuming consumer products also brings some detrimental effects. Firstly, purchasing household products leads to the depletion of many natural resources. When people’s demand increases, many materials and ingredients will be overexploited by the business which will demolish the sustainable development of the world. For example, coal is being mined in a significant amount and even on the verge of extinction to make charcoal toothpaste because of residents’ preferences. Furthermore, spending money on household goods will make it easy for people to fall into consumerism. The more they buy the more upgraded and unnecessary items they have which makes people put importance on materialism than others’ values. Consequently, this phenomenon leads to the degradation of social morality.
In conclusion, people should not be incited to shop for more consumer products because of its negative impacts on society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6095890411 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92311723579 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9605258965 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.2 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335288131205 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113516979672 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518031438701 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211283981592 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279730097872 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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