It IS BETTER FOR FOR STUDENTS AT UNIVERSITY TO LIVE FOR AWAY FROM HOME THAN TO LIVE AT HOME THEIR PARENTS
It is often said that the university students who live with their parents can not achieve positive results. I completely agree with this view , which causes difficulties for them. Because of the lack of education environment and traffic issues ,mostly ,in mega cities.
To start with ,It can be seen that some students can not be ready for the institute tasks, which has been result of unpreferable environment. In other words, They have no competition. However, the ones inhabiting in education spot experience daily discussions one another. For instance ,It is clear that many successful inventors lived in study places and achieved some noticing personal bests, unlike others. Thus, most students would not rather study at their dormitories than live at university.
Besides that, commuting to the education destination has been one of the major problem that going through students who lives far from their universities. Meaning that, nearly everyone travel in their own automobiles or by public transports whether to work or education spots ,this means that, traffic congestion that appears as a result of rising of transports brings to suffer from a bit difficulties, like traffic stress, disappointment with study and so on. For example , In European countries owing to hard traffic ,students have given up travelling from their homes in return for staying at universities. Therefore, as a consequence of unacceptable traffic ,they would prefer to live in education places.
In conclusion. the negative home environment causing to less progress and commuting issues lead to boredom and stress have been main factors to stay at universities so far. It is highly recommended that students should make a choice to live education places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in other words, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33090909091 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90194329313 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621818181818 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6805061559 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.714285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362469201172 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105954210896 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101999798968 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206942226277 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365809751871 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.