In this day and age, an increasing number of contemporaries are paying attention to whether it is beneficial or detrimental for people to keep using social media for communication instead of face-to-face interaction. Personally, I believe that the benefits of this type of communication is overshadowed by the drawbacks.
In terms of the positive, the widespread of social networking make it easy for people to keep in touch with their loved ones, regardless of geographic locations. For example, students who study abroad can stay in contact with their families and friends on a daily basis by using the video call features of Facebook, Skype or other apps. Moreover, social media like video conferencing gives companies and enterprises the golden opportunity to expand their business worldwide without worrying about the challenges and problems caused the inability of their employees to attend company's meetings and training.
Regarding the negative,I personally believe that when it comes to communication, social media does more harm than good. The abuse of social media reduces the quality of interpersonal communication. It is observed that, nowadays, a range number of people are so heavily addicted to the social networking sites that they do not pay attention to people around them even their families. In addition to this, social media also affects the style of speaking and writing, especially the youngsters. These days, many teenagers have a habit of using abbreviated words, which are frequently used in texting messages and social media in academic essays and formal emails.
From these above mentioned reasons, the conclusion can be drawn that despite the benefits social networking brings, it comes with an exceeding share of problems ranging from poor communication to negative style of speaking and writing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, regarding, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44561403509 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97627843162 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.998332584 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.090909091 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178339267557 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700699604786 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496058019903 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103341125077 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691195423421 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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