Letter to council for the dirty street:
Explain why it has become dirty recently
What problem it has caused
Giving some suggestions.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Ahmed Karem, and I am one of the citizens of Jeddah city who lives at Al Marwah district. I am writing to you regarding a serious issue people face it in this area.
The first point I would like to raise is that the streets in Al Marwah neighbourhood have become quite dirty, and There is much litter at everywhere; this problem has happened because of the lack of litter boxes at the street. Moreover, the Available dustbins are damaged; It is no maintenance for it.
another thing I forgot to mention is that there is a bad smell at the street; Furthermore, some undesirable animals are living in these areas such as Rates and mice; these animals could transfer some terminal diseases to children.
One final issue that I would like to discuss with you is that some suggestions to solve these crises which are put extra dustbins; besides, It is recommended to repair the available.
I lock forward to hearing from you. Your prompt response is highly appreciated; should you require any further information, you will contact me. Thanks in advance.
Faithfully,
Ahmed
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...is recommended to repair the available. I lock forward to hearing from you. Your...
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...t me. Thanks in advance. Faithfully, Ahmed
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...ks in advance. Faithfully, Ahmed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, moreover, regarding, so, another thing, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84736842105 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64682426133 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652631578947 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.9071142911 44.8134815571 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 4.34317383033 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0920505070033 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025925191603 0.0766984524023 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337342567313 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0454456613593 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040537234415 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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