Nowadays, people are divided into two different groups. There are the ones who enjoy living in huge busy cities and the ones who enjoy living in rural areas. Personally, I would rather live in the countryside than in a city. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, residing in the country means that your life will be quiet and peaceful. Unlike cities, which are usually crowded with an overwhelming number of people, the countryside guarantees you a life with no disturbances or distractions. In other words, there will be no external factors that might result in disrupting your routine. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I graduated from university, I decided to leave the city and move to a detached rural area. Even though there were times when I felt bored and lonely since I had no neighbours, I noticed that the quality of my life dramatically improved. To be more specific, I stopped experiencing acute headaches which resulted from the loudness and the noisiness of the city life. Furthermore, I finally got the opportunity to truly relax without stressing about anything and having neighbours bother me. Needless to say that after living there for a couple of months I did not want to return to the fast paced rhythm of life which characterizes modern cities.
Secondly, the countryside enables a person to be close to nature and engage in various outdoor activities. In other words, not only is life in the countryside more comfortable since there is more space even in the houses compared to the tiny apartments in which people live in urban areas but it also results in an overall improval of a human’s mental and physical health since there is no pollution of any kind. For example, when I moved to the country, I noticed that my health stopped deteriorating. I finally stopped seeing grey buildings around me and inhaling the harmful gases emitted by cars. I got the chance to go to the forest which was a magic experience for me as there were no parks in the city or green areas with trees in which I lived. Consequently, I was able to be in great shape both mentally and physically.
In conclusion, undoubtedly, living in the country and living in an urbanized area both have significant advantages and disadvantages. Overall, I am of the opinion that it is considerably better to reside in the countryside as it offers better living conditions, which are characterized by quietness, an improvement in health and being able to directly interact with nature.
- TOEFL T P O 08 Integrated Writing Task 3
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- Some people prefer to work for a large company Other prefer to work for a small company Which would you prefer Use specific reasons and details to support your choice 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 374, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... able to directly interact with nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84738041002 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87112830305 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530751708428 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8740536655 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9047619048 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190233529575 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518183178688 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733558591493 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133756131252 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603095857829 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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