The chart below gives information about the ageing population worldwide in 2000 and make predictions for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people aged 60 and over in 2000 and provision in 2050. The general overview here is that the rate of ageing population in 2000 always surpassed by the rate in the prediction of 2050.
To specify, in 2000, while there was only 10% of world population, who was 60 years old and over, the highest percentage was seen in Europe and North America with 20% and 16% respectively. Oceania had a third largest group of elderly people, at 13.5 % of its population, followed by Asia, Latin America, and Africa with the percentage being less than 10%.
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