Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Nowadays, due to the rapid progress of technology, and the internet, and the evolutionary events occurring in the communication process, life has changed a lot and we cannot underestimate the role of these improvements on the life of contemporary human beings. In this way, some people believe that modern human is less happy in comparison to its ancestors. However, in my humble brain, these changes and alterations have brought some serious signs of progress that make people happier than before. In the following essay, I will discuss the main reasons for my personal belief.
To begin with, as mentioned in the first paragraph, technology has improved and today, communicating with other people is not a matter of time and location. Actually, almost every individual adult on the earth has a mobile phone right now, and hence, they have the ability to keep in touch with their family members, friends, and other people at any time and any place. As a result, today's humankind will be happier because no matter where they live, they can connect to the internet and make a call with a person far from where they are located.
Secondly, I believe that life has become easier than before. Just imagine life in half-decade before. Our grandparents had to spend a great deal of time on every single daily chore and this made them really exhausted. For instance, whenever they wanted to wash dirty clothes, they had to walk along a path through the riverside and wash the clothes manually. However, right now, we have the chance to put all these clothes in a small machine existing in the house and just by touching a small button, all the clothes will be washed. So, we have more time to care about ourselves, do other things, focus on our eagers, and improve our lives.
Finally, yet importantly, there are more facilities, entertainment, and amazing things out there that bring us joy. Right now, if you feel bored, you have the opportunity to turn on the television and watch a movie, listen to music, take a taxi or drive your personal car to go to somewhere amazing and enjoy your life. However, most of these things were not invented in the past years and when people were bored, the only thing to do were to go on a picnic somewhere near their house or gather together. Therefore, life was more insipid and people couldn't bring joy to their life as easily as we can do now.
To sum it up, today people are happier than before because life has been facilitated using the invented technological devices, people can communicate with each other easier, and they have more time spending on their personal aims and goals. Hence, they are living a more bright life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 550, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...efore, life was more insipid and people couldnt bring joy to their life as easily as we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2213.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77969762419 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53610071522 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533477321814 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1881694621 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.473684211 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3684210526 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242247285004 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661733776255 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582710692804 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128473421942 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486472283414 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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