Some people think that giving their children a certain amount of money every week will help them have fewer financial problems in the future? Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that giving their children a certain amount of money every week will help them have fewer financial problems in the future? Do you agree or disagree?

This is a universal acknowledged fact that although formal education begins in classroom, home is a place where one learns the lesson of life. Nowadays children are becoming money minded due to rapid advancement in technology. It is believed that parents should give money to pupils on weekly basis so that they would become self independent to do financial transactions in a fruitful manner while others refute this thought. These points of view will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.

To begin with, everybody wants abundance amount of money to purchase some luxurious things for their ...

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