news play an important part of most people life why is news so important to people why it is so much news dedicated to bad news should the news focus on good news instead.
It is ubiquitously known that news has been integrated part of society since the mankind get way to exchange a method of news.even sense technology took place This essay shall elucidate the significance of news and influence of negative news along with the suggestion to concentrate which type of news in ensuing segments.
First and foremost, reason why the news have been indispensable part of every nation owing to this people make aware about surrounding as well as they get knowledge from other. To be more precise, If one nation's achievement affect the other nation which will be helpful for human growth and increase the reputation and popularity of nation. For instance In 2019 India sent spacecraft on Mars which aim had to find knowledge about the life possibility of life on Mars that telecast watched by all nation of the world. Undoubtedly, It had not get success yet the other nation appreciate the India's work and effort. Hence, news spread awareness and make the people up-to-date.Moreover, majority of news connected with other nation. To illustrate, news affected the other country business,health due to travel. For example,covid-19 news was spread in December 2019 that had been badly affected various nation. A few nations had not touch with affected country due to awareness owing to this, they start lockdown earlier where they get not in touch the news about bad effect of that virus. Consequently, by listening the news the people safe encountered valuable lives
By fortify further, every television channel fo
want to promot their channel and increase their TRP for this they use a various method they want to pay attention from Audiences. Not only this but also,the negative news always influence the public due to the human psychology which is more attract the negative thoughts so the news channel and TV channel and newspaper always promote the negative news.
However, News channel, newspaper spreading awareness and gaining benefit to run their business they should spread awareness about positive news so the people become positive in the life. every news channel and newspaper spreading and shareing the news about murder and stolen things these type news always create and comfortable zone among the people these type of news make the people mentally sick and create a fear sometime day at a depression on people's mind. Not only this, these type of news are harmful for human health and as well as their psychology. If the news channel and newspaper spread positive news on their channel and newspaper then they keep the people surrounding safe, aware and they also create the healthy environment around the people.
To recapitulate, after discussing all the aspect I velehmely voch that although, news are very essential part of our society and we should present a positive news to make the people positive about their life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2396.0 1615.20841683 148% => OK
No of words: 471.0 315.596192385 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08704883227 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69108761835 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464968152866 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 741.6 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4577595584 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.75 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4375 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432783872463 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173511734899 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108523050732 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232825305745 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122374106417 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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