As it is nigh on impossible to save one and all’s skin, some people claim that governments should put their minds to their own citizens only. To a certain extent, I do understand why delivering aid to all people inside and out is an unachievable task and do agree that leaders should prioritize local needs as well. However, I strongly disagree with a school of thought which contends that the governments should solely pay addresses to their nations for several reasons.
On the one hand, it is impuissant for governments’ support to reach all the places as their number is so enormous in many separate regions across the globe and their types of needs are various also even if we now hold more and more means of transport which have transformed the way that international assistance could be given. Africa, for instance, is considered as a needy continent as it has to suffer famine and contagions regularly, poses developed nations several obstacles in terms of seeding food and medicine. Moreover, the most essential role of each government is managing the stability and development of their nation, as, regardless of either the affluent nations or undeveloped nations, no country all over the place do not have the underprivileged as a part of their population. For this reason, so as to promote a brighter life for all people, each country has to minimize poverty by satisfying local needs first and foremost.
On the other hand, giving a hand to our neighbor nations cannot belittle as it is the only vital key to get to a more sustainable future. All have to accept that things change with every second, the present moment could not last forever, a country can be really powerful in the world but future is always unforeseeable, it could be a really poor one and need support from the other nations, thus assisting inhabitants in other countries, to some extent, is synonymous to assisting people in the home country. Take, for example, Ebola pandemic, outbroke in Africa in 2014, had killed many thousands by that time, which, if not coped by hundreds of US and UK doctors and nurses who were sent to African countries, would rapidly spread from Africa to other nations, including the US and the UK. Furthermore, the practice of helping people outside territories would increase a government’s credibility in the eyes of international friends.
In summary, the responsibilities of a government towards their people need to be absolute under normal circumstances, but sometimes showing their amity to other countries is equally important to live in peace and stability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 432.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99305555556 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90382885306 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564814814815 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.293227747 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.75 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315442331998 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110204994763 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805649229542 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190164637539 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972503371105 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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