This is true that recently, husbands have more contributed in house affairs such as taking care of children and tend to stay home.in the meantime, women spend majority of their time at workplace. I think this rooted in recent advancements and changing people's thought in modern world. Also, this event has two different dimensional impacts on situations and relationships in families.
On the one hand, one reason for this incident is about equal rights movements between male and female that provides great opportunities for women to autonomous and follow their dreams or whatever they want. In this case, various occupations are prepared for them, and they endeavor to attain the novel positions in society as well as they can. Therefore, the evidences show from the last century the number of prosperous women has increased in diverse fields such as science and medical.
However, this is a profitable chance for women to improve their talents and skills, families would be destroyed gradually due to lack of maternal emotions at home. The roles of maternity are far beyond the expectations of people. Meanwhile, fathers never ever can be an appropriate replacement for mothers because of huge instinct differences between male and female. In addition, scarcity of mother's love influence on babies who could suffer in the adverse aftermath. Furthermore, the position and responsibilities of members in family would be devastated, also after a while that would make an agitation or disaster.
In conclusion, although working outside for women is a perfect promotion for them, men never can play mother's role for breeding up children. In my opinion, this occurrence should be controlled because some catastrophic consequences might be happened in families that are unpredictable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35460992908 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92808184596 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648936170213 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6486219202 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.153846154 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285850514032 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811825367173 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550513325707 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155566789063 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365532858516 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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