Some people think that when a prson travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local pratices and customs.To what etent do you agree?
There is currently a controversial issue over whether travelers should immerse themselves with the indigenes.From my perspective,it is essential to take part of them which for some is the goal to achieve when visiting new places.
There are many benefits about the surrounded dangers that could only be revealed by the local people.One good exaple could be scamming,where the main victims are the visitors due to their lack of understanding about the local currency thus easier to come up with additional fees.As a result,having a local residents for guiding would be an ideal solution.
According to many,their goal when travelling is to get a snip from favorite luxury brands.However,little know that spectacular landscapes and local traditions worth more of their attention.After all,any magneficient products will sooner or later be worn or be forgotten but a historical relic could imprinted deeply into everyone's minds for serving a long part of history.
Moreover,cultural diversities its also worth to concern when taking a trip to different regions.Developing relationship with local residents for sure will grand visitors a great deal regards to their experiences about their hometown.Living habits and activities,for instance,by adapting to this new culture,the guests will be more matured and flexible on getting used with unfamiliar circumstances.
In conclusion,I firmly believe that visitors should be considered to join the local community and pretend as one of them in order to assure their safety and to be aware of common scams on new people.Beside,travellers could have a great opportunity to be capable of switching their living styles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, after all, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5905511811 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.6605282131 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633858267717 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0832755432 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 284.0 106.682146367 266% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.8 20.7667163134 245% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.06120827912 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117894619766 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681460604919 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0171828263522 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681460604919 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171828263522 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.3 13.0946893788 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.03 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.21 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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