Some people prefer to eat at food stalls or restaurants. Other people prefer to preapare and eat food at home. which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and exmaples to support your answer.
When women are depressed, they cook or go shopping. It’s common truth. As our life is getting more and more stressful it means we will always have home-made food. But as the recent statistics show it’s not as easy as it sounds: nowadays 50 percent of people eat outside the home while in 1900 it was only 2 percent. I really hate the stress but I prefer to eat at home.
Firstly, it’s much more economical. By eating at home you save a considerable amount of money. For example, eating once at restaurant can cost a weekly budget. But, however, I like to spend celebrations or special days ou...
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I have a question: how many words should contain each part of TOEFL essay-Intro+Body (2-3 paragraphs)+Conclusion?
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.125 21.0
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.267 0.35
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Score: 5.5 out of 6 (or 27 in 30)
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 363 350
No. of Characters: 1741 1500
No. of Different Words: 219 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.365 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.796 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.555 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 130 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 91 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.125 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.401 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.542 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.267 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.511 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.094 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5