In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be case?
Do you think it is positive or negative development?
In light of the growing economy in some countries, a lot of people consider that buying a house is much more essential than renting one. While there is no denying the advantages of renting a house, I personally agree with this thinking for a few reasons.
It is understandable why some think they prefer possessing a house to buying one. first, renters gain benefits from the flexibility of leasing a home, for example, my uncle is wealthy but he still rents a house because he can move out whenever he wants. Furthermore, a tenant doesn't have to pay a mortgage, take loans or be responsible for damage caused by natural disaster. Nonetheless, renting contains risks since the owner has a right to adjust rental cost without prior notice. In addition, living in a house which you don’t have ownership of is a lack of comfort and full of stressors. For instance, you may have to compensate for a little scratch on the wall or even can not paint the house with our favourite color.
On the other hand, purchasing a house is superior to leasing one in many ways. first and foremost, property brings to the masses a stable life. house buyers don’t have to pay rental expenditures every month and be free to decorate their own house. Moreover, house payment is a lucrative investment for the reason that the house price may go up dramatically in the future if the owner has foresight. For example, a person had bought a house with 10000 dollars and five years later, the infrastructure surrounding his house developed and the house price rose double to 20000 dollars. However, major cities are rife with ordinary people who are not able to afford their desirable houses.
In conclusion, I believe the upside of buying a home is far more significant than their downside and it is definitely positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, while, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88535031847 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72029708448 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611464968153 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9663712187 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.266666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9333333333 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201417743284 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650124953136 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045800127843 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128737981947 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516752110046 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.