Some people believe that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams always succeed in sports. Others think that success in sports depends on mental attitudes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Fitness is the important factor in sports. Nowadays, sportsman and sports team are more conscious about the fitness. For the athlete mental attitude and fitness both are important. In this essay I will discuss both the views. In my opinion for the athlete mentally positive attitude is more important than physical fitness.
To begin with, in this competitive Eire, the game like cricket, football, boxing, volleyball etc., have important as body language for all these games on at little to maintain his/her body fit and strong.Without fit and strong body he oblique she cannot play the game. These games need flexible body because all the game’s moves, for these he/she has to prepare their body language.
On the other hand, an athlete have to prepare than mind according to the match or a game. Mental situation of team and player can help in winning the game in any kind of situation. If a player is physically fit and strong in match but he/she is absent by mind or cannot concentrate on match‘s moves or situation, then he/she has more chance to lose the match. To cite an example, the famous cricket player downgone leverock from Bermuda, he is the one of the heaviest cricketer in the world his weight was two 80 pound, but his positive mind and attitude towards the game brought him as the player of National Cricket team of Bermuda, Bermuda.
I pen-down by saying, mental situation of any player or team can change the whole match at the last moment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tude towards the game brought him as the player of National Cricket team of Bermu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, as to, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80708661417 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44333449199 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53937007874 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.6155053238 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0957529346064 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520199677287 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473432300374 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702920753654 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067283865793 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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