Nuclear technology is considered to be on of the most important discovery os a mankind. Most of the countries across the globe have their own nuclear missiles. It is often argued that these weapons are the reason that our world is at a peace. Along with the power of weapon, nuclear force provides other energy too that are inexpensive and clean. I believe, even though nuclearization has a power to destroy the entire planet, the benefits it has to offer outweight the negative side.
All those country who has their nuclear weapon possess a threat to each other. The damage caused by these weapons is not unknown. One of the best example of nuclear damage is Hiroshima nuclear blast. This atomic bomb took thousands of life and the radioactive substance that was left, managed to prolong its effect causing various birth defects in the newborn. But, now to avoid such attacks all the nuclear holding countries must sign a treaty to maintain the peace for the betterment of human survival.
On the other end, there are various areas of interest, where this nuclear technology have been proved to be a boon. First is electricity, power generated with the help of a nuclear plant is much more efficient and cheaper. The conventional method today used to generate energy is through water turbine. This technology uses a high volume of water in order to provide power in a small city. Whilst a nuclear power can help to generate power for many big cities. Second is nuclear fuel that is used in space ships and rockets, it allows one to travel at a very high speed. Many countries invest a lot in space exploration as it has become important enough for human race to know the universe they live in.
In conclusion, although the possession of nuclear weapon creates a threat amongst humans, the advantages that come along with it like affordable electricity and the powerful fuel overshadows its disadvantage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: ON_OF_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
Nuclear technology is considered to be on of the most important discovery os a ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85626911315 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57864361144 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56880733945 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2038473274 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2222222222 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417264526613 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12592800124 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780577467806 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244135997236 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076660193034 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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