Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
The agreement or harmony between two people has always been difficult to maintain since it is very intricate to satisfy each other needs all the time. I mostly agree with the statement and believe one should be as honest as possible. But sometimes lie is also required when we know that truth will definitely hurt the other and it will be impossible to re-establish the harmony. The followings are the main ideas behind my thesis.
First of all, the relationships works on the trust. If you do not trust the other person, you can never be his or her friend, partner or any family member. It is natural human tendency to hope from your loved ones to be always honest and this trust between two people gets demolished when one lies or betrays. For instance, I had a friend in Kota. We were both preparing for our enginerring entrance exam there. We used to eat, study, and wander around the street togther. But one day, I found that he was going under my back and was distracting me from studies. After that day, I did not speak to him or meet him. Therefore, trust is a primacy in each and every relationship.
Secondly, lie is immortal. When you lie, you have to keep lying and it just never ends. And till you realise, that it is enough time, you will have mountain of lies and it becomes really difficult to get out of it. For example, you already have plans with your girlfriend and your friends ask you about your availability for partying tonight, in the fear of sounding that you are ignoring your friends, you lie. They ask you further question about where are you actually going and what are you doing? You have to keep lying until they stop and you end up with a lot of jargon which is now very difficult to keep up. In this scenerio, if you have trusted your friends and told them the truth in the beginning, you could have saved yourself from the whole charade. Therefore, sometimes you just have to take risks and tell people the truth.
Lastly, sometimes there is no option and you have to lie to keep the harmony intact. People do some stuff which they are not particularly proud of and the last thing they want is to be left alone by their loved ones. In that situtation, sometimes we have to wait and lie till we realise that now it is finally the time to tell the truth. Consider a scenerio in which, you have lost money in gambling and you are already very depressed about it. You know that your father hates gambling and he will never understand how much already you are in pain. So, you lie to him when he asks about the money and wait till you are ready to talk about it with your father. In this case, it is not entirely bad if you eventually tell your father the truth.
To sum up, lie is bad. It has power to break the long established harmony. Therefore, one should always avoid to lie and try to be as honest as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, you know, first of all, to sum up, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 86.0 43.0788530466 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2333.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 531.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39359698682 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80035803286 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28056920141 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476459510358 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8806032892 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2580645161 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1290322581 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45161290323 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104158652005 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328188391525 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471991028806 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701595963314 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356698420611 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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