Do you agree or disagree? It is important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples.
The Famous quote “old is gold”, definitely it is true. Many people believe that making new friends are more important than stay with childhood friends; however, I strongly disagree with them. In my opinion, keep good relations with oldies is better than make new friends for two reasons, which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, old friends are more reliable, I mean to say that we can blindly trust on them because they will not break your trust at any cost. On the other hand, some people think that making new friends are beneficial because as your friends list increases day by day, your contacts should increase, and this will help you to progress in the field of business and other general things. But for me it is not true, though you can increase your contacts while making new friends that might be helpful in the future; however, you cannot rely on them. For instance, my brother is a good example to prove this. Two years ago, when he finished his graduation, he was searching for a job, but he could not find any good job, and because of this reason he was very stressed, then he asked for help from his close childhood friend. His friend made him a business partner in his big company because he has blind trust in my brother and he knows that my brother is a hard worker. As a result, my brother never let his friend’s trust down and worked very hard to raise his company’s position to the topmost company in the state. If my brother does not have old friends that can trust his ability, he would never become a successful business person.
In addition to the old friends are reliable, they are our well-wishers, which means if we have any problem close friends will always give you a good suggestion. Because they care about your feelings. In contrast, sometimes while making many new friends, they just care about their profit so, it is a big chance that they can give you the wrong advice. Consequently, you will be in big trouble and they will get profit. My personal experience is compelling evidence of this. Five years ago, during my graduation, I had many friends but not a best friend. I was a topper of my class, for this reason, many friends are jealous of me. One day I got a notice for attending the conference that was held out of my city. But I was very confused that should I attend or not because the conference was on the same date as my class test, I asked help from my friends that what should I do, they suggested me that you have to attend the class test, and do not go to the conference it was not so important. As a result, I left the conference, but after some time, I realized that was my biggest mistake. This incident proves, that not every friend will care about you and give you good advice only close friends can think good for you.
In conclusion, based on the arguments explored above. I strongly agree that it is necessary to have close old friends in everyone’s life because they are trustworthy and keep a good vibe for you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...will always give you a good suggestion. Because they care about your feelings. In contr...
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Line 5, column 540, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... graduation, I had many friends but not a best friend. I was a topper of my class...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stworthy and keep a good vibe for you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, so, then, well, while, for instance, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 101.0 43.0788530466 234% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2474.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 549.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50637522769 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84053189512 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38962747614 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44262295082 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 742.5 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.039931716 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.083333333 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323301544537 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967042482622 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736045179656 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215657713489 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372977362588 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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