You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend In your letter:
Thank your friend for the holiday
Explain that you left your wallet in their house
Give them instructions on how to send it back to you.
Dear Jane,
Hope you’re doing great.
I had a wonderful time in Goa last week. Thank you very much for inviting me over for a week of just lazing around at the beaches and late night parties, just like old times.
On my return back home, I realized that I misplaced my wallet in your house. You should be able to find it in the side table next to the bed in my room. It contains my driving license and other access cards which I’ll need to move around town and enter my work place.
Would you send the wallet to me at my address at the earliest? I’ve heard that Blue Dart offers reliable express overnight delivery and you can use their service to send it over. Don’t worry about the charges as I’ll take care of it.
Don’t forget to send me the pics from our trip to the beaches and clubs in Goa.
Hope to hear from you soon,
Jarin.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 7, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...parties, just like old times. On my return back home, I realized that I misplaced my wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33742331288 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.91084352326 2.54303337028 75% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674846625767 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1023672565 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2727272727 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.181818181818 4.34317383033 4% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226306695169 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078992459727 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559683454704 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107601207442 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488610897663 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.3 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.27 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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