Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more
exercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas now many suffer
loneliness and health problems. What are the causes of this and what are some
solutions
Illness and Loneliness are ubiquitous these days compared to the older days because of reduced physical activities and spending less time with near and dear ones. This essay will discuss the main causes of sickness and social isolation resulted from a sedentary and socially fragmented lifestyle; further providing the solutions to these problems including improving one’s social life and diet.
People are living a lavish and luxurious lifestyle than ever before. In addition, these standards of living has made the need of socialization oblique. The human interaction is becoming obsolete with the advancement of technology, which allows a work to be done by the click of a fingertip. This results in a generation who rejoice alone time. Besides, such way of living makes a person lazy and careless about his/her physical health which further gives rise to diseases. A recent study shows that there is an increase in number of unhealthy population by 16% with an increase in economy. Thus, a comfortable life is malicious for both social as well as the physical aspect of an individual.
Maintaining an active social life and a fit body are both vital to stay happier and healthier. People need to realize that if they live a lonely life they will suffer from depression and mental disorders and a negligence in taking care of one’s body will exacerbate these issues. Therefore, to avoid such repercussions it is essential to spend more time with families and friends, probably by arranging an outing or a weekend filled with some sports activity which will benefit in improving both social and mental health.
In conclusion, people should establish a routine keeping in mind healthy habits and mental well-being to overcome health issues and loneliness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2027972028 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74806490584 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604895104895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8582791274 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.461538462 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159554211311 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489193661093 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387829262633 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896232238449 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428151224855 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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