The current trend in education is to move away from traditional exams and instead have continuous assessment over the school year.
What do you think of this trend?
The education system has evolved from the traditional methods of assessing students on their academic performances, to now having a regular evaluation throughout the year. I firmly agree with this practice and will substantiate my views in the subsequent paragraph.
Firstly, the regular assessment reduces the burden of studies to a great extent. In other words, youngsters are highly stressed during their exams, and the fear of getting passing marks becomes their major challenge. In fact, some of the youth have started consuming antidepressant and other medication to overcome the anxiety of exams. Apart from this, the majority of students only glued to their coursebooks like worms, leaving behind the other activities. Thus, traditional exams required intense study to get good scores, therefore, creating a stressful environment for students.
Moving ahead, by adopting the continuous assessment method, students are more likely to enjoy their life along with the academics. As, this method requires multiple fields to assess a single child, such as marks on class behaviour, assignments, and sports activities. This process favours students in passing the exam more easily as compared to traditional one's. To illustrate this point, a survey has been done in 2019, and it has concluded that around 70% of school-going children are happy and relaxed with this evaluation method, as it gives them an opportunity to score well in exams.
In conclusion, after giving my personal opinion in the aforementioned paragraphs, I opine by saying that, the continuous assessment in school has brought a significant change in the education system. As, now the children are not only enjoying their studies, but are also doing excellent in it.
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also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in other words, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44485294118 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89903401985 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628676470588 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.433199963 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.923076923 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197349083639 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065739535487 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445422427743 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120312377196 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333949631693 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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