Dear John,
I hope you and your family is doing well. I am writing this letter to express my sympathies for you and your family for the great loss of your pet dog Scooby.
I really moved to tears when I received your letter yesterday about the demise of Scooby. I still remember him as a small pup, all energetic and friendly playing together with us when we were kids. He was such a lovely, obedient and a friendly dog I have ever encountered in my life. Moreover, he was like a part of your family than a regular pet.
I am in short of words to console you for your great loss. I know that it is hard for you to recover from this sorrow. Life has to move on further, hope that Scooby has the best place in heaven. Take care of youself and your family and get better soon.
Warmest regards,
Naveed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I hope you and your family is doing well...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r yesterday about the demise of Scooby. I still remember him as a small pup, all ...
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Line 4, column 254, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Warmest'.
Suggestion: The Warmest
...lf and your family and get better soon. Warmest regards, Naveed
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y and get better soon. Warmest regards, Naveed
^^^
Line 6, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... better soon. Warmest regards, Naveed
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, so, still, well, as to, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 653.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21290322581 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14238238634 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625806451613 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8562811125 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.3636363636 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346987618429 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118399577828 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875013824714 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241072522263 0.12726935374 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583931158373 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.