Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world, while others believe that scientists are more influential. Discuss both sides of view and give your opinion.
It is an irrefutable fact that scientists and politicians play the most crucial role in providing world a direction. Which one of these has a greater influence, however, is one of the most contentious topics. This essay will address both sides of this argument and will conclude with why I believe that scientists have a greater influence.
Supporters who believe that politicians have a higher influence on the world argue that these people are the policymakers. They are the one who can make, break, or amend the laws which impact the population of the respective region or sometimes beyond. For example, the government of India implemented a new law of CAA which affected the people migrating to India to take shelter. There are forums where world leaders discuss and decide on global matters. For example, to tackle the climate change challenge, leaders of the world got together at the UN assembly and signed the historic Paris agreement. Thus, the world population depends on political leaders for many reasons.
On the other side, scientists, even though do not make every single decision, drive a lot of decisions that the politicians have to make. It is because of their continuous efforts that the world is a better place to live today. To illustrate, thanks to the scientists, the world was able to get over with the 1919 flu pandemic and it is again these people who can save millions of lives by providing vaccines and therapeutics to beat the coronavirus. Additionally, scientists try to change the world based on their proven research rather than using an arbitrary decision-making process as employed by politicians. The world has seen many wars that resulted due to the poor decisions of the political leaders. World War II is a classic example of that.
In conclusion, it is true that the world depends highly on politicians and scientists. In my opinion, scientists have a greater influence on the world as without them the human lives would not have evolved the way it is today.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94658753709 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81686004098 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540059347181 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2697650755 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0588235294 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244870244862 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751520776171 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633389721803 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151499147372 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327648706591 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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