It is argued by some that having money brings in the happiness. Money can help you buy a lot of luxury items that makes life easy and indirectly offers people their self time, making them happy about it. However, money alone cannot bring happiness, one needs their family and friends to be around to share the joy and have fun with them.
Earning a lot of money has become the main thing in everyone's life. People across the world work hard to earn and provide for their family. It is widely known that money can buy different things that helps you to make your life simpler. For instance, cars, washing machine, cleaning robots , dishwasher and many other such electronic items that can work unmanned and saves a person time are quite expensive. So, if one has enough money they can buy such items and can spend the time for their sole purpose.
The most common reason of being unhappy is that people are unable to dedicate time to themselves and family due to busy work schedule. In order to maintain work - life balance, having latest household related technological items can help to save a lot of time, that was otherwise utilized in doing the chores manually. So, money can definitely help buy products having utility value and this indirectly makes people happy, as they can spend that amount of time in doing what they like.
On the other hand, having money alone cannot make a person happy. A person always needs another person to share their happiness, so it is important that one must not lose the touch on social life in order to become rich. Also, having passion and achieving it makes a person feel good about it. For example, people having interest in playing music, feels happy when they play their instrument.
In conclusion, money can definitely help a person to enjoy the items having utility value and save time for themselves. However, one must not forget other important social aspects of life in earning money, and should always keep a balance between work and life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at helps you to make your life simpler. For instance, cars, washing machine, cle...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., cars, washing machine, cleaning robots , dishwasher and many other such electron...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'having the latest'.
Suggestion: having the latest
... order to maintain work - life balance, having latest household related technological items c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74712643678 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19275988616 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502873563218 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0659100588 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1764705882 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400057457051 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141605310103 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819702726604 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240138257424 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597465477226 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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