Some people are happy to spend their whole life in the same area and other prefer to live in many different places in their life time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this contemporary era, some masses prefer to reside at distinct locations to ameliorate their lifestyles, where as others are reluctant to adopt this phenomena of living societies throughout their life.However, I would shed light on both these perspectives and provide grounds as per me in the upcoming paragraphs.
My point of you is regarding former notion can be elaborated with multifarious points below.
Firstly, exposure to varying environment,
People get more experience of life, culture and society rather than the familiar one. To illustrate this, sometimes children also suffer a lot because of sudden movement , however this will prove beneficial at other stages of life as they become flexible and more tolerable towards other people having different backgrounds. On the long run, this adaptability will have a positive effect on their carriers as well.
Augmentation to it, enthusiasm, chunks of society, who are enthusiastic may have enormous gains as they find new ways to explore after heading to other locality to stay in. Moreover, it would be a great chance to get a break from a monotonous life because they will be going to meet new people. Lastly, more people explore more they experience. Therefore, accommodating at distinct area is prove to have several great outcomes which are being reflected now and then.
On the contradicting view, some valid hurdles can be considered according to the Society who wants to stay at one place. Firstly, time consuming, it will be a gross wastage of time for a working person to settle down if he or she wickets in a short period of time. Simultaneously, to become adaptable in certain location the person needs to struggle a lot. Even in such cases this might disturbs the work life.
To recapitulate my point of view is, after confabulating the given aspects it is apparent that altering the apartment shortly has myriad of benefits, Society who wants to stay at one place. Firstly, time consuming, it will be a gross wastage of time for a working person to settle down if he or she will gets in a short period of time. Simultaneously, to become adaptable in certain location the person needs to struggle a lot. Even in such cases this might disturbs the work life.
To recapitulate my point of view is, after confabulating the given aspect it is apparent that altering the apartments shortly has married of benefits, which always overshadowed its negative consequences. Hence, I firmly believe living at different places should be considered as an appropriate approach.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08830548926 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93892478835 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522673031026 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3025049351 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.210526316 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0526315789 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197810777182 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564627819882 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458274021131 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837398459688 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643242484918 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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