The given bar chart illustrates the information about the proportion of Australian men and women in various age groups, who did daily physical activity in year 2010.
As can be from graph shows that, high ratio of regular physical activity did by Australian men age group of 50 to 24, it was 52.8% as well, in that same age, women did 47% physical exercise. In addition, in in 25 to 34 age group male and female was doing exercise which number war 42.2 % and 48.9 % respectively. Apart from the,53.3% male had been doing physical activity in age group of 35 to 44, when they were highest approximately by 30% as compared to girls for do physical activity.
According to the, 45 to54 age of male was doing daily exercise, it number was 43.1 % , which was significantly decreased nearly by 10.1% as compared to men because male number was 53.3%. Moreover, the number of 65 and over age groups were little difference between male and female for doing physical activity, which were 46.71% and 47.1 % respectively.
In overall, it can be seen from chart that, more proportion of women had chosen to do regular activity as compared to men as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, well, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62502485754 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 24.644409889 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 134.285714286 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369552907971 0.215688989381 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188887787388 0.103423049105 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142810469575 0.0843802449381 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249308931077 0.15604864568 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129653171942 0.0819641961636 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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