CENTRAL BLOOP

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CENTRAL BLOOP

It all comes from everyone's trust in her because this is not her first time doing charity. Earlier this year, she also called for more than a few billion to buy water purifiers to help people in salt drought areas. Or when the Covid-19 epidemic broke out, Thuy Tien could mobilize tens of billions of dong to buy a ventilator in just a few days. Currently, Thuy Tien and his wife have returned to the central region and are going to directly aid households that have suffered heavy losses caused by storms and floods. All of her steps are recorded, publicly transparent and widely shared on her personal fanpage. No matter how you look at it, charity is still a humane job. There are many highland children who have warm clothes and go to school like their peers. How many people have a full meal, are healed, and reset a new life. Kindness is not found far away, but even in the small things in life: porridge bowls for 0 VND in the hospital, donating clothes, books to support floodplain people, ... Kindness is like that. spread and incubate in society. It goes beyond what is known as "name polishing". Hopefully, more and more kind hearts will stand out to help people in difficult and unlucky circumstances. And above all, we need to thank, cherish, cherish all that they have been doing to contribute to this society!

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1026, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Spread
...lain people, ... Kindness is like that. spread and incubate in society. It goes beyond...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65254237288 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44005195623 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699152542373 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4192306684 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4285714286 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0248963733978 0.244688304435 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00635333686338 0.084324248473 8% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229072818312 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0248963733978 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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