It is hard to deny the pleasant enjoyment for tourists to experience foreign cultures traveling abroad, which leads impressionable people to generate the view that international travel brings more benefits than domestic travel. However, such a statement suffers from logical and factual fallacies, and it should be examined meticulously. As far as environments, new perspectives, and culture are concerned, I firmly hold that tourists can gain more benefits from traveling in their own country.
First and foremost, domestic travel is environmentally friendly, as these tourists reduce their carbon footprint. Meanwhile, Dependent on how large their country is and how far they are planning on traveling, they can completely alleviate the need to travel by plane. Their travels will have much less of an impact on the environment if they travel by train to reach your destination. Not to mention that they will also make more of the actual journey, being able to admire the scenery along the railways, seeing the cities, hills, and farms, rather than clouds, out of the plane's window.
Furthermore, the fact that people are easy to become complacent and perhaps even bored of the place where they live indicates, but if they spend time traveling in their own country, they will discover new perspectives for their surroundings indicates that domestic travel is more meaningful to people. In my case, I live in the southeast of China and frequently take trips to other regions of China to rediscover the beautiful landscapes and exciting cities surrounding me. My unforgettable domestic travel experiences remind me why so many people from all over the world visit China. Had it not been for traveling around China, I would never get the chance to see my country with fresh eyes.
Nevertheless, a voice arises that only when traveling to foreign countries tourists can have the most in-depth cultural experience. Ironically, although one of the main attractions of traveling is discovering and understanding other cultures, people sometimes need to look a little closer to home, and many people do not know much about their country's heritage and history. Knowing their culture helps people construct their identity and build a sense of pride around being part of their country - it is educational for people to plan a few trips to cultural centers, historical landmarks, or inspiring museums not far from home to gain more knowledge about their own country's heritage. Therefore, people should give priority to domestic travel rather than international travel.
In a nutshell, I maintain that people who choose domestic travel can gain more benefits than international travel. Admittedly, as my favorite quote from Penelope Fitzgerald goes, it is interesting to note everyone has a different take on the world, a different opinion, and given the same inputs have completely different outputs, and some people may oppose me. However, I believe they will compromise after being exposed to my article.
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- TOEFL T P O 42 Integrated Writing Task 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2530.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29288702929 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87870169272 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548117154812 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 780.3 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7631460543 48.9658058833 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.555555556 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5555555556 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35575129227 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118822192715 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658536205708 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210680455663 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670864716357 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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